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My Brother Essay For Class 3

I have a brother. He is very naughty. He cares for me and loves me a lot. We play lot with each other. He always helps me in studies.

Sometimes he gets angry at me whenever I touch his belongings without his permission. But after sometime he says sorry to me. There is no doubt that he is a very intelligent guy. My brother also shares his stuffs with me. He shares his chocolates, sweets and candies with me.

He is popular in his school for his skills in cricket. He also participates in other fields like dance, music and art. Also, he scores good grades in exams. In other words, he is an all rounder. He can easily interact with anyone and for this reason he has a lot of friends. They come to our house and play with both of us. He plays video games, carom, snakes and ladders and many more games in his free time with me. He also teaches me several tricks to win any game. He takes care of me whenever our parents are out of house. He tells me short stories. Sometimes he fights with me on silly things and then we start pillow fighting. He also shouts at me when I don’t give him the television remote. But then he agrees with me and we together watch our favorite television shows and enjoy them. He shares everything with me and I am also very comfortable with sharing my feelings with him. He is not only my brother but also he is my best friend . I love my brother very much.

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I very much enjoyed your paragraph and the portrait of your family! If you'd like to revise with a focus on only grammatical issues (as opposed to the questions of style and personal taste that mwestwood addresses above), here's where I would start:

There's an article missing in the line "She was a single mom for long time"—the phrase is usually "for a long time." (Articles are tough.)

The sentence "My younger brother is studying...

I very much enjoyed your paragraph and the portrait of your family! If you'd like to revise with a focus on only grammatical issues (as opposed to the questions of style and personal taste that mwestwood addresses above), here's where I would start:

There's an article missing in the line "She was a single mom for long time"—the phrase is usually "for a long time." (Articles are tough.)

The sentence "My younger brother is studying in grade 10 at Overfelt high school" sounds grammatically correct to me, but "studying in grade 10" is a phrase that I've heard less often. The more typical way to express that idea might be: "My younger brother is in 10th grade at Overfelt High School." (Also, in the name of the high school, the words "high school" are usually capitalized—so "I go to high school" is just fine, but if you say "I go to Overfelt High School" it has to be capitalized as part of the name "Overfelt High School.")

"He always walks or takes the bus to school because he doesn't has driver" is really close! "Has" should reflect the auxiliary verb "does" (or here "doesn't") next to it: "He always walks or takes the bus to school because he doesn't have driver." "Driver" also needs an article: "he doesn't have driver."

"He always jokes and tells something funny" is also really close! The only thing is that "tell" usually takes a direct object (meaning you have to tell someone). So how about: "He always jokes and says something funny"? Or maybe "He always jokes and tells me funny things"?

"He is a dynamic and talkative" gives me a great picture of your brother's personality! The only grammar problem here is the article (again, articles are tough). "Dynamic" is an adjective (not a noun) so it doesn't require an article. You can just say, "He is dynamic and talkative."

I understand the phrase "we always spend a good time together" with no problems! I think the more typical phrase, though, is "we always have a good time together."

Those are the only grammatical questions I had! Your family sounds wonderful. Best of luck with your studies!

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